Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


The sunlight softly glistens
On the rice, so sweet and squishy.
Cucumber pokes out of the top,
Provoking,
Tempting,
The need,
The need to feed on that sweet, sweet roll.
Oh perfection before my eyes!
So succulent and tasty
The flavors explode on my tongue.
The wasabi burns so sweetly
I can feel the fiery invasion.
Pickled ginger calms the invaders,
Green tea,
The storm calms.
Oh, incredibly tasty last roll,
GOODBYE!!!
©2008-2009 ~guitar-insanity
:iconguitar-insanity:

Author's Comments

Written by me and my friend Anita, our amazing idea to write a poem together about sushi. There was one last roll... it was sooo good. Any ways this is what the two of us came up with.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconsicof02:
To a teenager (me), this is provocative as hell and extremely innuendo-ish. Maybe that's why I like it so much? Haha.
:iconguitar-insanity:
Haha well me and my friend who wrote it are teenagers as well with sick and twisted minds. That's why we wrote it.
:iconandhisinvisibleband:
i never thought sushi couuld be so interesting... tasty yes... but interesting... wow

--
Future Rockstar

Details

July 19, 2008
598 bytes

Statistics

4
0
47 (0 today)
2 (0 today)

Site Map